commit 01b6ba38b09ca4039469062edde094bfc4654b54
parent 5b52ff978eb708450287d79b1d6262c007ab7f99
Author: Kévin Le Gouguec <kevin.legouguec@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 4 Sep 2019 10:45:00 +0200
Tweak introduction
- "Meaningful" is not the issue, "correct" (both functionally and
formally) mostly is.
- Doesn't look like I'm adding notes about entertainment stuff.
- This "fuckload" is gratuitous. Remove it.
Diffstat:
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
# Peniblec's Memory Leaks
-## still reachable: 10705 words in 23 pages
+## still reachable: 10671 words in 23 pages
Hi! I am a software engineer interested in [a bunch of things].
@@ -17,16 +17,14 @@ trivial patches to some free-software projects, and I have an
ever-growing [list of itches] I intend to scratch someday, but they're
not exactly noteworthy.
-I find it tough to cook up meaningful patches while desperately
-[trying to keep up with my industry], [screwing around with my
-computers], and leaving the keyboard long enough to convince my loved
-ones that I'm still alive (and that I do love them).
-
-Also I like to read and watch and play [lots of silly things].
+I find it tough to cook up proper patches while desperately [trying to
+keep up with my industry], [screwing around with my computers], and
+leaving the keyboard long enough to convince my loved ones that I'm
+still alive (and that I do love them).
And I guess that's a fitting note to end to this introduction on.
-**NB:** this repository is a work in progress; I have a [fuckload] of
+**NB:** this repository is a work in progress; I have a trucload of
notes to beat into shape and add to this repository. Some links above
may seem dead; actually, they were never alive to begin with. I guess
that makes them… gestating?
@@ -37,6 +35,3 @@ that makes them… gestating?
[list of itches]: itches/
[trying to keep up with my industry]: reviews/
[screwing around with my computers]: guides/setups/
-[lots of silly things]: reviews/entertainment/
-
-[fuckload]: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1131729/quotes/qt0536137
